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You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing this letter to explain what happened to me today. My son and I had one way ticket from Istanbul to Vancouver and I unfortunately missed it. Let me describe how it comes; my 2 years old son drank an expired bottle of milk last night and became sick. He had a stomach ache since we arrived at airport, therefore we had to visit the medical station in the airport, and it took time to inject him a serum. Tomorrow afternoon I have another flight from Vancouver to Toronto and it's very important for me to achieve that because I have my PHD final lecture the day after. Could you be kind enough to give us a seat in first flight to Vancouver and prevent me missing all of my tries last year? Sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing this letter to
explain
what happened to me
today
. My son and I had one way ticket from Istanbul to Vancouver and I unfortunately missed it.
Let
me
describe
how it
comes
; my 2 years
old
son drank an expired bottle of milk last night and became sick. He had a stomach ache since we arrived at airport,
therefore
we had to visit the medical station in the airport, and it took time to inject him a serum.

Tomorrow afternoon I have another flight from Vancouver to Toronto and it's
very
important
for me to achieve that
because
I have my PHD final lecture the day after.

Could you be kind
enough
to give us a seat in
first
flight to Vancouver and
prevent
me missing all of my tries last year?

Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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