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You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Grandmother, I am writing to apologize for being out of contact with you for a long time. As I have promised you to be back to home after our final semester that would be ended at the mid week of this month. But, due to some unfavorable situations at at our college, the final examinations have been post ponded for 2 weeks. Now, the papers are going to be held at the start of next month. Therefore, I will be busy till that as I have to study for my annual exams. Similarly, extra tuitions classes have been arranged too, for the preparation of the final tests. So, a busy routine of my studies has kept me out of touch from you. keeping in mind, the schedule of my exams and results, I have planned to visit you at the midweek of next month. We will have fun together. Take care and stay blessed. Warm regards, John
Dear Grandmother,

I am writing to apologize for being out of contact with you for a long time. As I have promised you to be back to home after our final semester that would
be ended
at the mid week of this month.
But
, due to
some
unfavorable situations at at our college, the final examinations have been post ponded for 2 weeks.

Now
, the papers are going to
be held
at the
start
of
next
month.
Therefore
, I will be busy till that as I
have to
study for my annual exams.
Similarly
, extra tuitions classes have
been arranged
too, for the preparation of the final
tests
.
So
, a busy routine of my studies has
kept
me out of touch from you.

keeping in mind, the schedule of my exams and results, I have planned to visit you at the midweek of
next
month. We will have fun together.

Take care and stay blessed.

Warm regards,

John
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IELTS letter You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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