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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation it self is fine. My housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favorably. Let me explain my situation. The trouble was started about three months ago when my housemate first moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine. My old housemate was extremely considerate. My current housemate, however, stays up almost all night and playing incessantly loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep properly and because of that cannot concentrate on my studies. Would you please transfer me or my housemate to another room. I would prefer to live with whom is quiet and more considerate of others. As long as, it is quiet, I don't mind whom I live with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Maria
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
let
you know that I am unhappy with my
current
living conditions. While the accommodation it self is fine. My housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation
favorably
.
Let
me
explain
my situation. The trouble was
started
about three months ago when my housemate
first
moved
in. Prior to that, everything was fine. My
old
housemate was
extremely
considerate. My
current
housemate,
however
, stays up almost all night and playing
incessantly
loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep
properly
and
because
of that cannot concentrate on my studies. Would you
please
transfer me or my housemate to another room. I would prefer to
live
with whom is quiet and more considerate of others. As long as, it is quiet, I don't mind whom I
live
with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours
Faithfully
, Maria
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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