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Dear Joe, I hope you are doing well.

Dear Joe, I hope you are doing well. I’m writing with regard to your upcoming camping vacation. I believe you will have a great time camping. I know you’re a big fan of the outdoors and camping is the truly best way to experience nature. That area you planning to go to is renowned for its wide range of flora and fauna. This type of holiday is not without its drawbacks. The main one is that you need to do a lot of preparation and make sure that you don’t forget any essential items. On top of this, the isolated location means that you’re going to have to cook all your own food because there are no restaurants nearby. I really wish that I could join you, but as you know summer is my busy season. I must keep my nose to the grindstone and wait until winter before I can take a holiday. Please let me know if you’ve got any more questions. Best regards, Mike
Dear Joe,

I hope you are doing well. I’m writing with regard to your upcoming camping vacation.

I believe you will have a great time camping. I know you’re a
big
fan of the outdoors and camping is the
truly
best way to experience nature. That area you planning to go to
is renowned
for its wide range of flora and fauna.

This type of holiday is not without its drawbacks. The main one is that you need to do
a lot of
preparation and
make
sure that you don’t forget any essential items. On top of this, the isolated location means that you’re going to
have to
cook all your
own
food
because
there are no restaurants nearby.

I
really
wish that I could
join
you,
but
as you know summer is my busy season. I
must
keep
my nose to the grindstone and wait until winter
before
I can take a holiday.

Please
let
me know if you’ve
got
any more questions.

Best regards,

Mike
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IELTS letter Dear Joe, I hope you are doing well.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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