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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sree, I hope you are doing well. I'm glad to know that you're planning to go for your first camping trip in the last week of October. I believe you'll have great time on this kind of holiday. I know you're a big fan of outdoors and camping is the better way to experience nature. That area you're thinking to go to is notable for its wide range of flora and fauna. This type of holiday is nothing without its drawbacks. Nature's weather conditions are unpredictable. So, it is considerate to be prepared for all circumstances. Also, you may come across bug and bites that are quite normal during journey. I wish I'd join you, but as you aware summer is my hectic season. I must keep my nose to the grindstone and wait until winter before I can take a vacation. Please let me know if you've got any more question, Best Regards, Misriya
Dear Sree, I hope you are doing well. I'm glad to know that you're planning to go for your
first
camping trip in the last week of October. I believe you'll have great time on this kind of holiday. I know you're a
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fan of outdoors and camping is the better way to experience nature. That area you're thinking to go to is notable for its wide range of flora and fauna. This type of holiday is nothing without its drawbacks. Nature's weather conditions are unpredictable.
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, it is considerate to
be prepared
for all circumstances.
Also
, you may
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across bug and bites that are quite normal during journey. I wish I'd
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join
you,
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as you aware summer is my hectic season. I
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must
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my nose to the grindstone and wait until winter
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I can take a vacation.
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Please
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me know if you've
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any more question, Best Regards, Misriya

IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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