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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Neighbour, I am writing this letter with regard to your complaint pertainig to difficulties you faced last week at night due to noise coming from my house. First of all, to let you know the noise that you were listening was of the drilling machine that was frequently used by our carpenter. Since we are undergoing some furniture work at home, this requires drilling machine to be used at some time intervals. I sincerely apologise for the sound pollution you faced at night which caused lack of concentration for your children in studying. I had no intension to create problem for my neighbours since being a parent I understand your concern. In order to avoid repeating that mistake, I would take necessary actions. Those actions would include restricting the working hours of carpenter in morning and closing all doors and windows of my house to minimise the sound leaving my house. I will also try to complete the work as early as possible. Thank you for understanding and apologies once again for the inconvenience. Yours Sincerely, Subray Shenvi
Dear
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Neighbour
,

I am writing this letter with regard to your complaint
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pertainig
to difficulties you faced last week at night due to noise coming from my
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house
.
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First of all
, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know the noise that you were listening was of the drilling machine that was
frequently
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used
by our carpenter. Since we are undergoing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
furniture work at home, this requires drilling machine to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
at
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some
time intervals.

I
sincerely
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apologise
for the sound pollution you faced at night which caused lack of concentration for your children in studying. I had no
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intension
to create problem for my
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neighbours
since being a parent I understand your concern.

In order to avoid repeating that mistake, I would take necessary actions. Those actions would include restricting the working hours of carpenter in morning and closing all doors and windows of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
to
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minimise
the sound leaving my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I will
also
try to complete the work as early as possible.

Thank you for understanding and apologies once again for the inconvenience.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Subray
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Shenvi

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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