Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to register a complaint regarding your late services in terms of an ordered cheque book 2 weeks ago.
To elaborate on the issue, on 23rd of December I received an email from your bank, whereby I had been told that I was entitled to obtain a cheque book, as I had maintained a savings account in your reputed bank for more than a decade. As a result, I placed a cheque book requisition on that day through your website, since it was mentioned that if clients order it online, they will receive their order within five days. Unwantedly, since then 14 days have passed.
As for a few queries, I wonder if you could inform me about the precise date by which the cheque book would be delivered to me. Due to the fact that I have recently purchased a car, and two thousand dollars have been paid as down payment, the rest of which should be paid in five installments through this ordered cheque book to enable me to take delivery of my car. That is why I am in desperate need of it.
Taking the mentioned problem into consideration, I am requesting you, as the manager of the bank, to investigate into the matter as hastily as possible to find out who is to blame inasmuch as if it happens again to other clients you will lose your regular customers and reputation. I would highly appreciate it if you could inform me what measures you are going to take to expedite the process to fulfill my need.
I await your prompt action on this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Shima Nayebian
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to register a complaint regarding your late services in terms of an ordered  
cheque
  book
 2 weeks ago.
To elaborate on the issue, on 23rd of December I received an email from your bank, whereby I had been  
told
 that I  
was entitled
 to obtain a  
cheque
  book
, as I had maintained a savings account in your reputed bank for more than a decade.  
As a result
, I placed a  
cheque
  book
 requisition on that day through your website, since it  
was mentioned
 that if clients order it online, they will receive their order within five days.  
Unwantedly
, since then 14 days have passed.
As for a few queries, I wonder if you could inform me about the precise date by which the  
cheque
  book
 would  
be delivered
 to me. Due to the fact that I have recently  
purchased
 a car, and two thousand dollars have  
been paid
 as down payment, the rest of which should  
be paid
 in five installments through this ordered  
cheque
  book
 to enable me to take delivery of my car.  
That is
 why I am in desperate need of it.
Taking the mentioned problem into consideration, I am requesting you, as the manager of the bank, to investigate into the matter as  
hastily
 as possible to find out who is to blame inasmuch as if it happens again to other clients you will lose your regular customers and reputation. I would  
highly
 appreciate it if you could inform me what measures you are going to take to expedite the process to fulfill my need.
I await your prompt action on this matter.
Yours  
sincerely
, 
Shima
  Nayebian