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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Dear Mr Smith, I am Anushia, participant of the 'Environment and pollution management' training programme that you are organising next month in London. As I am aware that you expect volunteers to organise the social events, I am writing this letter on that regard to express my interest. I have been involved in many voluntary works since my college days and have extensive experience in organising such events. In my office, I am often responsible to plan important events, coordinate with the event management team, facilitate the guest lecturers and ensure conducting successful meetings. I enjoy playing such roles and I am quite confident that I would be the right person for your social event as well. I need to know some extra information about the events to be conducted. Hence I request you to send me more details regarding the training session and your plan for it so that I can start contributing right away. My participant ID is SEL-087 and you can check my profile before selecting me as an organiser. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks in advance. Yours Faithfully Anushia R K

Dear Mr Smith,

I am Possible spelling mistake found.AnushaAnushka
Anushia
, participant of the 'Environment and pollution management' training Possible spelling mistake. ‘programme’ is British English.program
programme
 that you are Possible spelling mistake. ‘organising’ is British English.organizing
organising
next
 month in London. As I am aware that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 volunteers to Possible spelling mistake. ‘organise’ is British English.organize
organise
 the social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
, I am writing this letter on that regard to express my interest.

I have been involved
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 voluntary works since my college days and have extensive experience in Possible spelling mistake. ‘organising’ is British English.organizing
organising
 such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
. In my office, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 responsible to plan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
, coordinate with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 management team, facilitate the guest lecturers and ensure conducting successful meetings. I enjoy playing such Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).roles, and
roles and
 I am quite confident that I would be the right person for your social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
as well
.

I need to know This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra information about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 to be conducted
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 I request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 regarding the training session and your plan for it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 contributing right away. My participant ID is SEL-087 and you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my profile This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 selecting me as an Possible spelling mistake. ‘organiser’ is British English.organizer
organiser
.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Thanks in advance.

Yours Faithfully


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Anushia
 R K