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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:  Give details of the course you took at the university  Explain why you recommend the university  Give some advice about how to apply

Dear Sree, It is great to hear from you after such a long time. I am so happy for you on your decision to apply for the Bachelor of Technology degree program in computer science and engineering at University of Calicut. Let me share some details about this course. It is a SGPA based degree program and takes 4 years to graduate. There will be 8 semesters and need to achieve 6 CGPA in all the semesters to complete the course. B. Tech Computer Science course is about the basics of computer programming and networking concepts such as algorithms, computation, programming languages, programm design, computer hardware, computer software etc. Given that you have a similar background as mine, this course will be a great value addition to you. Apart from the course itself, you will have a chance to study in one of the best universities in the Kerala. The research faculties are very well reputed here and there is an equal focus on gaining practical experience. Besides that, this is one of the most culturally diverse universities in the country and you will feel at home. I do want to inform you that if you are really planning to join the college in the next fall semester, you should apply as early as possible. You can submit all your information through the online portal as well as pay the application fees. Don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any question and keep me posted! Best regards, ABC
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Calicut
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based degree program and takes 4 years to graduate. There will be 8 semesters and need to achieve 6 CGPA in all the semesters to complete the
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. B. Tech Computer Science
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is about the basics of computer programming and networking concepts such as algorithms, computation, programming languages,
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programm
design, computer hardware, computer software etc.
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Given
that you have a similar background as mine, this
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course
will be a great value addition to you.

Apart from the
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course
itself, you will have a chance to study in one of the best universities in the Kerala. The research faculties are
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very
well reputed here and there is an equal focus on gaining practical experience.
Besides
that, this is one of the most
culturally
diverse universities in the
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country and
you will feel at home.

I do want to inform you that if you are
really
planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the college in the
next
fall semester, you should apply as early as possible. You can submit all your information through the online portal
as well
as pay the application fees.

Don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any question and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
me posted!

Best regards,

ABC
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:  Give details of the course you took at the university  Explain why you recommend the university  Give some advice about how to apply

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