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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take Mgkq

Dear Mrs. Gupta Firstly, I would like to explain the reason behind the noise that happened last night in my house due to which you had to face trouble. Actually, last night, I arranged a birthday party for my daughter and invited her college friends who were meeting with each other after a long span of time and they were dancing together to loud music which I could not stop for the sake of making her day special. So, I am extremely sorry and will definitely take care of it in the future. However, I will not give you another chance for which you need to make any complaint. For this time, I want to compensate you with a Rs 5000 cheque. I will appreciate it if you forgive me and accept the enclosed cheque. Can't be we friend again? Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks, Yours Sincerely, Arfa Naz

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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

150 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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