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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take Mgkq
Dear Mrs. Gupta Firstly, I would like to explain the reason behind the noise that happened last night in my house due to which you had to face trouble. Actually, last night, I arranged a birthday party for my daughter and invited her college friends who were meeting with each other after a long span of time and they were dancing together to loud music which I could not stop for the sake of making her day special. So, I am extremely sorry and will definitely take care of it in the future. However, I will not give you another chance for which you need to make any complaint. For this time, I want to compensate you with a Rs 5000 cheque. I will appreciate it if you forgive me and accept the enclosed cheque. Can't be we friend again? Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks, Yours Sincerely, Arfa Naz
Dear Mrs. Gupta

Firstly
, I would like to
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explain
the reason behind the noise that happened last night in my
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house
due to which you had to face trouble. Actually, last night, I arranged a birthday party for my daughter and invited her college friends who were meeting with each other after a long span of
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time and
they were dancing together to loud music which I could not
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stop
for the sake of making her day special.

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So
, I am
extremely
sorry and will definitely take care of it in the future.
However
, I will not give you another chance for which you need to
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make
any complaint.

For this time, I want to compensate you with a Rs 5000
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cheque
. I will appreciate it if you forgive me and accept the enclosed
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cheque
. Can't be we friend again? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks,

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Arfa
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Naz
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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