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You have just bought a new wardrobe from a mail order company. Unfortunately when it arrived you found that one of the doors was missing. In your letter: Give the company your reference number and purchase date Explain what the problem is Say what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ........., You should write at least 150 words.

You have just bought a new wardrobe from a mail order company. Unfortunately when it arrived you found that one of the doors was missing. In your letter: Give the company your reference number and purchase date Explain what the problem is Say what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . , yq0l
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to complain about the broken door in the wardrobe, which i recently ordered from your company. The wardrobe with three open door with reference number #2467180 was purchased from Ashely company, in last week on 18th March 2021. When the wardrobe arrived at my address, i found that its one door is missing. I am shocked, the wardrobe is completely awful and unusable. I cant use this wardrobe, please send me new wardrobe at my door step in exchange of this refurbished wardrobe. I also paid the delivery charges (250$) to Rooty hills and this is really bad feeling when i received a broken wardrobe. This is your inconvenient service with the customer. Please check your products before deliver to the customers. I hope you will resolve this issue as soon as possible and send me new Wardrobe on my address. Your sincerely, Sonia Munir
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to complain about the broken
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door
in the
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wardrobe
, which
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i
recently ordered from your
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company
. The
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wardrobe
with three open
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door
with reference number #2467180 was
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purchased
from
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Ashely
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company
, in last week on 18th March 2021.

When the
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wardrobe
arrived at my address,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
found that its one
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door
is missing. I
am shocked
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wardrobe
is completely awful and unusable. I
Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?
cant
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use
this
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wardrobe
,
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please
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send
me new
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wardrobe
at my
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door
step
The usual prepositions to use after "in exchange" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "in exchange for"?
in exchange of
this refurbished wardrobe.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
paid the delivery charges (
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$250".
250$
) to
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Rooty
hills and this is
really
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bad
feeling when
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
received a broken
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wardrobe
. This is your inconvenient service with the customer.
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Please
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check
your products
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before
deliver to the customers.

I hope you will resolve this issue as
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soon
as possible and
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send
me new
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Wardrobe
on my address.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

Sonia
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Munir

IELTS letter You have just bought a new wardrobe from a mail order company. Unfortunately when it arrived you found that one of the doors was missing. In your letter: Give the company your reference number and purchase date Explain what the problem is Say what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . ,

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151 words
6.0
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