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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food 0Yk9

Dear Sam, Hope you and your family is blessed and happy. Thank you for giving me this chance. May i ask you about some details about this trip as i am so confused. Can you give some sort of hint or advise what should I bring to your family as a present. Because its my first time seeing your family members. Your culture and taste is totally different than ours. Nextly, Can You tell me what kind of things we will be doing during my stay, You know clothes, dresses and many more. I come to know that its bit hot as here and also people in your area likes to wear country style. I don't want to look seperate from them. Further more, about the food. I heared that you people like to eat more spicies. While surfing on Internet, It suprises me than an average mexician can eat upto 1-2 Kgs a single time. Taco's is the food which i would like to try and many more. Hope to see you soon. Best regards and warm wishes Raman

Dear Sam, Hope you and your family is blessed
 and happy. Thank you for giving me this chance. May Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 ask you about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about this trip as Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 confused.

Can you give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sort of hint or advise what should I bring to your family as a present. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 my first
 time seeing your family members. Your culture and taste is totally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Did you mean 'different "from"? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.from
than
 ours.

Possible spelling mistake found.Neatly
Nextly
, Can You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me what kind of things we will be doing during my stay, You know clothes, dresses and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to know that its bit hot as here and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in your area likes to wear country style. I don't want to look Possible spelling mistake found.separate
seperate
 from them.

Further
 more, about the food. I Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "heard", the past tense form of the verb 'hear'?heardhairedheadedairedhiredfeared
heared
 that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 like to eat more Possible spelling mistake found.speciesspicesspicierspiciest
spicies
. While surfing on Internet, It Possible spelling mistake found.surprisessunrisessup risesuprises
suprises
 me than an average Possible spelling mistake found.Mexican
mexician
 can eat Possible spelling mistake found.untoUptonPTOup toUSPTO
upto
 1-2 Possible spelling mistake found.KgKGBKBSAGSCGSKGO
Kgs
 a single time. Taco's is the food which Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would like to "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.try to
try and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best regards and warm wishes

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Raman

IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

179 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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