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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food 0Yk9
Dear Sam, Hope you and your family is blessed and happy. Thank you for giving me this chance. May i ask you about some details about this trip as i am so confused. Can you give some sort of hint or advise what should I bring to your family as a present. Because its my first time seeing your family members. Your culture and taste is totally different than ours. Nextly, Can You tell me what kind of things we will be doing during my stay, You know clothes, dresses and many more. I come to know that its bit hot as here and also people in your area likes to wear country style. I don't want to look seperate from them. Further more, about the food. I heared that you people like to eat more spicies. While surfing on Internet, It suprises me than an average mexician can eat upto 1-2 Kgs a single time. Taco's is the food which i would like to try and many more. Hope to see you soon. Best regards and warm wishes Raman
Dear Sam, Hope you and your family
is blessed
and happy. Thank you for giving me this chance. May
i
ask you about
some
details
about this trip as
i
am
so
confused.

Can you give
some
sort of hint or advise what should I bring to your family as a present.
Because
its
my
first
time seeing your family members. Your culture and taste is
totally
different
than
ours.

Nextly
, Can You
tell
me what kind of things we will be doing during my stay, You know clothes, dresses and
many
more. I
come
to know that its bit hot as here and
also
people
in your area likes to wear country style. I don't want to look
seperate
from them.

Further
more, about the food. I
heared
that you
people
like to eat more
spicies
. While surfing on Internet, It
suprises
me than an average
mexician
can eat
upto
1-2
Kgs
a single time. Taco's is the food which
i
would like to
try and
many
more. Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Best regards and warm wishes

Raman
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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