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Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it. wQkY
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. I am Mira Kapoor and I live at 123 Bank Street, Toronto, Ontario. I am writing this today in regard to the damaged road in front of my house which requires immediate repair as it is one of the main street in the locality. Due to the heavy rainfall last week, the road is drift off and there are many potholes on the driveway. These potholes has lead to a major accident of two-wheeler vehicles yesterday and three people got major injuiries due to it and they have been shifted to hospital as quickly as possible. Therefore, I would like to request you to fix the issue of this driveway by filling the potholes and rolling the concrete machine over it, so there is no accidents in future and people can drive their vehicles without any difficulties. I would highly appreciate your concern towards this important issue. Yours sincerely, Mira Kapoor
Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am Mira
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Kapoor
and I
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live
at 123 Bank Street, Toronto, Ontario.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this
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today
in regard to the damaged road in front of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
which requires immediate repair as it is one of the main street in the locality.

Due to the heavy rainfall last week, the road is drift off and there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
potholes on the driveway. These potholes
You should probably use "have", "haven".
has
lead to a major accident of two-wheeler vehicles yesterday and three
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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got
major
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injuiries
due to
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
it and
they have
been shifted
to hospital as
quickly
as possible.

Therefore
, I would like to request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
the issue of this driveway by filling the potholes and rolling the concrete machine over it,
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so
Did you mean "there are no accidents"?
there is no accidents
in future and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can drive their vehicles without any difficulties.

I would
highly
appreciate your concern towards this
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important
issue.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mira
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Kapoor
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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