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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Neighbors, I am Shubhangi and I reside in the Soleil Building. Hope everyone is having a nice week! I am writing this letter as it has come to my notice that there are certain issues such as regarding the noise from my apartment which has caused some sort of chaos to the various occupants of the building on my floor and other floor. I would like to clarify that the noise in my apartment is coming due to the internal work being done in my apartments. I am getting the apartment refurbished, such as the wall paining done and getting some wood work done. I understand that due to the wood work there is a lot of noise being generated and I would like to apologise for the same. I would please request everyone if they could kindly keep some patience as the work is being done and the work will be completed in 2-3 working days. It was paramount for me to start this work now as after a week, the weather is showing as it is raining so the work would have been delayed even further. With the sun shining at its peak, the work will be completed in a more smooth manner. I propose to change the timing of the wood work being done, so I can ask the carpenter to get the wood work done in the afternoon than getting it done in the evening. Most of us are not at home in the afternoon so the noise will not be an issue. Do let me know if all you are fine with the proposition and I can accordingly take action. If there are any other issues, please feel free to contact me. Thanking you, Shubhangi Agnihtri
Dear Neighbors,

I am
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Shubhangi
and I reside in the
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Soleil
Building.

Hope everyone is having a nice week! I am writing this letter as it has
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come
to my notice that there are certain issues such as regarding the
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noise
from my
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apartment
which has caused
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some
sort of chaos to the various occupants of the building on my floor and other floor.

I would like to clarify that the
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noise
in my
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apartment
is coming due to the internal
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work
being done
in my
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apartments
.
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I
am getting the
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apartment
refurbished, such as the wall paining done and getting
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some
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wood
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work
done.

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I
understand that due to the
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wood
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work
there is
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a lot of
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noise
being generated
and I would like to
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apologise
for the same.
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would
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request everyone if they could kindly
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keep
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some
patience as the
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work
is
being done
and the
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work
will
be completed
in 2-3 working days.

It was paramount for me to
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start
this
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work
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now
as after a week, the weather is showing as it is raining
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so
the
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work
would have
been delayed
even
further
. With the sun shining at its peak, the
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work
will
be completed
in a more smooth manner.

I propose to
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change
the timing of the
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wood
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work
being done
,
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so
I can ask the carpenter to
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get
the
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wood
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work
done in the afternoon than getting it done in the evening. Most of us are not at home in the afternoon
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so
the
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noise
will not be an issue.

Do
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let
me know if all you are fine with the proposition and I can
accordingly
take action. If there are any other issues,
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please
feel free to contact me.

Thanking you,

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Shubhangi
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Agnihtri
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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