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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Dear Alex, Hope you’re doing well. I remember the last trip we had to Florida, Miami at South beach and those adventurous sport activities we did together were really fun and exciting. I can totally understand and relate your situation to plan something for this summer. However, I really liked your idea for the Camping Holiday even I want to join you if I get vacation during that time period. Camping Holiday is really fascinating and adventurous too which can really help you to rejuvenate and calm your mind during the vacation time. I think it is very fantastic plan to escape the world of work for some days and live a life of a nomad in the woods without internet. I belive you will definitely feel positive around the nature, near the lakes you can enjoy fishing and kayaking. As well as there are a lot of fun activities during the night time at the camp site such as Bonfire, card games. While there are some drawbacks as well that in those hilly areas you will be out of network for few days and unable to contact your family and collegues if something important happens. And you might have to survive with the minimum facility services offered for example airbed, tent and packaged food. I have been to such camping holiday few years back and I also want to join you this summer if my boss allow me to take somne days off. Please checkout the trip advisors to get a package for the Colarado hills and do let me know the days of travel. Lets have fun brother! Regards Paul.
Dear Alex,

Hope you’re doing well.

I remember the last trip we had to Florida, Miami at South beach and those adventurous sport activities we did together were
really
fun and exciting. I can
totally
understand and relate your situation to plan something for this summer.
However
, I
really
liked your
idea
for the Camping Holiday even I want to
join
you if I
get
vacation during that time period. Camping Holiday is
really
fascinating and adventurous too which can
really
help
you to rejuvenate and calm your mind during the vacation time. I
think
it is
very
fantastic plan to escape the world of work for
some
days and
live
a life of a nomad in the woods without internet.
I belive
you will definitely feel
positive
around the nature, near the lakes you can enjoy fishing and kayaking.
As well
as there are
a lot of
fun activities during the
night time
at the camp site such as Bonfire, card games.

While there are
some
drawbacks
as well
that in those hilly areas you will be out of network for few days and unable to contact your family and
collegues
if something
important
happens. And you might
have to
survive with the minimum facility services offered
for example
airbed, tent and packaged food. I have been to such camping holiday few years back and I
also
want to
join
you this summer if my boss
allow
me to take
somne
days off.
Please
checkout the trip advisors to
get
a package for the
Colarado
hills and do
let
me know the days of travel.

Lets
have fun brother!

Regards

Paul.
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IELTS letter It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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