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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take EyWL
Dear Vivek, I am writing this letter in respond to your complaint related some noise issue from my home last week. I am highly apologise for the inconvenience caused by us due to a get together which went too long that night. Firstly, The utmost reason of the disturbance was the loud sound of the music due to my old music system which was quite annoying. Although, I have invited limited people in my promotion party despite the fact everyone came along their children who insisted to raise the volume of the songs. Secondly, My Air conditioner was not working so I was forced to open my main gate to ventilate the suffocation. Few of my friends were shouting while dance and that was the another cause of the trouble you have faced. However, I have posted my music player for sale on OLX because of its sound problem and also warned my friends to not repeat that silly behaviour near future. I assure you there will be no such disturbance in future form my side and Please accept my apology for the trouble. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Sonam Mahajan
Dear Vivek, I am writing this letter in respond to your complaint related
some
noise issue from my home last week. I am
highly
apologise
for the inconvenience caused by us due to a
get
together which went too long that night.
Firstly
, The utmost reason of the disturbance was the loud sound of the music due to my
old
music system which was quite annoying.
Although
, I have invited limited
people
in my promotion party despite the fact everyone came along their children who
insisted to raise
the volume of the songs.
Secondly
, My Air conditioner was not working
so
I
was forced
to open my main gate to ventilate the suffocation. Few of my friends were shouting while dance and that was the another cause of the trouble you have faced.
However
, I have posted my music player for sale on
OLX
because
of its sound problem and
also
warned my friends to not repeat that silly
behaviour
near future. I assure you there will be no such disturbance in future form my side and
Please
accept my apology for the trouble. Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,
Sonam
Mahajan
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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