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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter 1. Give details of your course 2. Say how the course would be useful 3. Explain how the company could help you do this course

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter 1. Give details of your course 2. Say how the course would be useful 3. Explain how the company could help you do this course rWjp
Dear Mr. White, I would be most grateful if you could support me for an online training course. I became aware of the course while I was doing a literature survey for our upcoming project. AS our next project is of clinical trails, so it will have more of medical background having clinical terminologies. The online course is about the clinical terms which are commonly utilized in clinical trials. The course will have online training followed by examination. The thing is, I will be leading our next project. So, this course will be very useful to progress with the project without any hassel. The training acquired through the course will be circulated within our team and this inturn will save our efforts to hire an associate for the same. This course will be economic, time consuming, and will help our team to acquire an additional skill set. I would appreciate if our company could help me with this course either by adjusting my schedule or by allowing me for the overtime. This adjustment will be for a limited duration. I look forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely, Prashant Wankhade
Dear Mr. White,

I would be most grateful if you could support me for an online training
course
. I became aware of the
course
while I was doing a literature survey for our upcoming
project
. AS our
next
project
is of
clinical
trails,
so
it will have more of medical background having
clinical
terminologies. The online
course
is about the
clinical
terms which are
commonly
utilized in
clinical
trials. The
course
will have online training followed by examination.

The
thing is, I will be leading our
next
project
.
So
, this
course
will be
very
useful to progress with the
project
without any
hassel
. The training acquired through the
course
will
be circulated
within our team and this
inturn
will save our efforts to hire an associate for the same. This
course
will be economic,
time consuming
, and will
help
our team to acquire an additional
skill
set.

I would appreciate if our
company
could
help
me with this
course
either by adjusting my schedule or by allowing me for the overtime. This adjustment will be for a limited duration.

I look forward
to hear
from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Prashant
Wankhade
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter 1. Give details of your course 2. Say how the course would be useful 3. Explain how the company could help you do this course

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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