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There is an acute water problem you are facing in a apartment where you are staying on rent. Write a letter to your landlord. Describe your problem in detail. How is it affecting your life. How can landlord solve this issue.

There is an acute water problem you are facing in a apartment where you are staying on rent. Write a letter to your landlord. Describe your problem in detail. How is it affecting your life. How can landlord solve this issue. pW83
Dear Mr. White, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the water problem which I am facing for two weeks. The apartment I am renting has a consistent water shortage issue for the last six months. This is the third time since the day I rented your apartment. The shortage provided in the apartment is inadequate for the family of three. The thing is, we as a family are unable to maintain a hygienic environment inside the apartment due to water shortage. Initially, the water supply was 24 hours a day. But it had been reduced from a couple of months to every alternate day. To survive with the amount of water available we had to bathe alternate day. This habit is affecting our health adversely causing skin disease. Prashant Wankhade
Dear Mr. White,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the
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water
problem which I am facing for two weeks. The
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apartment
I am renting has a consistent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
shortage issue for the last six months. This is the third time since the day I rented your
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apartment
. The shortage provided in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
is inadequate for the family of three.

The thing is, we as a family are unable to maintain a hygienic environment inside the
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apartment
due to
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water
shortage.
Initially
, the
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water
supply was 24 hours a day.
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But
it had been
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reduced
from a couple of months to every alternate day. To survive with the amount of
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water
available we had to bathe alternate day. This habit is affecting our health
adversely
causing skin disease.

Prashant
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Wankhade

IELTS letter There is an acute water problem you are facing in a apartment where you are staying on rent. Write a letter to your landlord. Describe your problem in detail. How is it affecting your life. How can landlord solve this issue.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
131 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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