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Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how to gather more support for the cause

Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how to gather more support for the cause B5V5

Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regards to an article in the newspaper about volunteering for the betterment of environment in our neighboring area. There is one NGO in particular "Nature FIRST" which draws my attention. Their main purpose is to clean the plastic waste from the parks in our neighborhood. All the waste is collected, than mainly plastic is separated and later it's sold to the recycling factories for the money. Revenue generated annually is used to buy latest equipment's for collecting waste and promotion moreover also help in efficient execution of project on massive scale. I would like to be part of this project as it is very important to conserve the nature for future generation other than that I am always very close to nature. For the start I want to be part of the weekly cleaning movement. My other idea is to give seminars in local community centers as well as all the educational institutes. Purpose of these seminars is essentially to motivate more people from the community to be part of it and promotion of the cause in a extensive manner. In order to get more help we can take certain steps. Sharing of the movement on social media platforms also organizing events and social gathering for the kids that will attract more and more families to be part of the agenda. It will motivate the kids to take care of their surroundings and keep it clean and pollution free. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Siddharth Bakshi

Dear sir,

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 an article in the newspaper about volunteering for the betterment of environment in our neighboring area. There is one NGO in particular
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Nature FIRST
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 which draws my attention. Their main purpose is to clean the plastic waste from the parks in our neighborhood. All the waste is collected
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 and later it's sold to the recycling factories for the money. Revenue generated annually
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part
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 is to give seminars in local community centers as well
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 more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 we can take certain steps. Sharing of the movement on social media platforms also
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 and social gathering for the kids that will attract more and more families to be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
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 of the agenda. It will motivate the kids to take care of their surroundings and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
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 it clean and pollution free. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
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