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There is an acute water problem you are facing in a apartment where you are staying on rent. Write a letter to your landlord. Describe your problem in detail. How is it affecting your life. How can landlord solve this issue.

There is an acute water problem you are facing in a apartment where you are staying on rent. Write a letter to your landlord. Describe your problem in detail. How is it affecting your life. How can landlord solve this issue. kd1O
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Krishna Vihar society and I would like to draw your attention to the water scarcity that we are facing these days as summer is almost around the corner. Let me explain to you my problem in detail. The situation started at beginning of March, around the end of the first week. The water supply that usually occurred for 3 hours was reduced to only one hour per day. This resulted in reduced water storage in our society tank. There would be frequent power-cut from April which will have no schedule and this can majorly hamper the water upliftment in case there is a power-cut during water supply time. I am a person living in a family of eight people where three among us are children between 2 to 5 years. The water requirement for our daily chores is greater than others to some extent. Even after using water with caution, we fell short of it towards day end. The storage that we have with us in the flat is proving insufficient. This is resulting in an increasing unhygienic environment difficult to deal with. Hygiene is an important factor when health issues need to be considered. I would appreciate it if you could arrange underground water storage that could be used by anyone who has its requirement in case of any urgency. This storage will be very helpful in upcoming days and will not at all rely on electricity problem. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully Mansee Shrungarpure
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of Krishna
Vihar
society and I would like to draw your attention to the
water
scarcity that we are facing these days as summer is almost around the corner.

Let
me
explain
to you my problem in detail. The situation
started
at beginning of March, around the
end
of the
first
week. The
water
supply that
usually
occurred for 3 hours was
reduced
to
only
one hour per day. This resulted in
reduced
water
storage
in our society tank. There would be frequent power-
cut
from April which will have no schedule and this can
majorly
hamper the
water
upliftment
in case there is a power-
cut
during
water
supply time.

I am a person living in a family of eight
people
where three among us are children
between 2 to 5
years. The
water
requirement for our daily chores is greater than others to
some
extent. Even after using
water
with caution, we fell short of it towards day
end
. The
storage
that we have with us in the flat is proving insufficient. This is resulting in an increasing unhygienic environment difficult to deal with. Hygiene is an
important
factor when health issues need to
be considered
.

I would appreciate it if you could arrange underground
water
storage
that could be
used
by anyone who has its requirement in case of any urgency. This
storage
will be
very
helpful in upcoming days and will not at all rely on electricity problem.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully


Mansee
Shrungarpure
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IELTS letter There is an acute water problem you are facing in a apartment where you are staying on rent. Write a letter to your landlord. Describe your problem in detail. How is it affecting your life. How can landlord solve this issue.

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  American English
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256 words
6.0
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