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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take DrOa
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing in regard to your complaint about the noise from my apartment two days back. It was my parent's 25th anniversary and we had a small get-to-gather at my place to celebrate the occasion. As the occasion was very special and to follow government guidelines to fight against coronavirus, we have invited not more than 10 people for party in my small flat. However, I did not realize that talks and music will cause loud noise and disturb your sleeping schedule. I would like to apologize fo the inconvenience caused to you and your family because of that party. In addition, I would like to ensure you that no such thing will happen in future which can cause any kind of trouble to you. And in case, if there is a party at my place, then I will end it before 11 pm so no one gets disturb due to it. Hope you will accept my apologise and come at my place to have a cup of coffee next sunday. See you soon, Mira Kapoor
Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing in regard to your complaint about the noise from my apartment two days back.

It was my parent's 25th
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anniversary and
we had a
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small
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get
-to-gather at my place to celebrate the occasion. As the occasion was
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very
special and to follow
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government
guidelines to fight against coronavirus, we have invited not more than 10
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people
for party in my
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small
flat.

However
, I did not realize that talks and music will cause loud noise and disturb your sleeping schedule. I would like to apologize
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fo
the inconvenience caused to you and your family
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because
of that party.

In addition
, I would like to ensure you that no such thing will happen in future which can cause any kind of trouble to you. And in case, if there is a party at my place, then I will
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end
it
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before
11 pm
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so
no one
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gets
disturb due to it.

Hope you will accept my
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apologise
and
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come
at my place to have a cup of coffee
next
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sunday
.

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See
you
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soon
,

Mira
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Kapoor

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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