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for promotion in a company tell them for only in napier not any others areas.

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Hi Jatinder, I am glad, you have chosen me for area manager position. This is my first achievement after joining in this store. When I got this offer, it was unexpecting feeling for me. One one problem, I found that transferring in other place. This is not match with my family decisions. I have 4 year old son. He already started his school from last month. I do not think so, he will happy to move in to another school. I am keen to work in Napier. This place is posh and relaxing for me. I also want area manager position to embellish my carrer. Therefore, I Joined the seminar too and also job interview. But I totally unsure about transferring is must. I am looking forward hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Manjit Kaur

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