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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take 9gyX
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter on behalf of the food which we ordered on weekend. Mine family just arrived to meet me after very long time because i don't live with them for by study purpose. So, they decided to come visit by, you know kind of like a suprise. So, we decided to have lunch outside and from people reviews I came across your resturant. While at resturant we decided to try some of your main dishes as they were highly recommended. Waiter takes the order and told us to wait for10-15 minutes, little bit late than usual because they getting more order in this particular time. We respect that but I think that does not work. Food which came out has no words, it was bad as hell. I called the management and they came out with no solution. You should take some action regarding this scenerio by maintaining the staff properly and in good numbers. I mean hire some extra people on weekends and ask your management to feel sorry for what they done. In the End, Resturant are in business because of people which eats, so start respecting it or there will be an end to it as some faced it already.
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter on behalf of the food which we ordered on weekend. Mine family
just
arrived to
meet
me after
very
long time
because
i
don't
live
with them for by study purpose.
So
, they decided to
come
visit by, you know kind of like a
suprise
.
So
, we decided to have lunch outside and from
people
reviews
I came across your
resturant
.

While at
resturant
we decided to try
some
of your main dishes as they were
highly
recommended. Waiter takes the order and
told
us to wait for10-15 minutes,
little bit
late
than usual
because
they getting
more order in this particular time. We respect that
but
I
think
that does not work. Food which came out has no words, it was
bad
as hell. I called the
management and
they came out with no solution.

You should take
some
action regarding this
scenerio
by maintaining the staff
properly
and in
good
numbers. I mean hire
some
extra
people
on weekends and ask your management to feel sorry for what they done.

In the
End
,
Resturant
are in business
because
of
people
which eats,
so
start
respecting it or there will be an
end
to it as
some
faced it already.
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
208 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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