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Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say What is the topic of the presentation? What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? What are your requirements for conducting this presentation?

Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say What is the topic of the presentation? What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? What are your requirements for conducting this presentation? ym2E

Dear Mr Jhon I'm writing you this letter in order to tell you about the presentation I am intending to present in our up coming training as per our latest discussion. For that reason I chose a topic that in my opinion is a very important one, specifically in these hard economical crisis we are facing. This is why i chose to talk about * communication and selling skills and managing stress among the staff*. Not only it's important to discuss such topic it's rather crucial to do it. Seeing the hard times we are facing and all the stress our staff are being put to, some of them are not being able to communicate right to the costumers or between each others which is causing a lot of complaints that we didn't use to face before. That being said teaching them the right techniques of communication would help them knowing how to satisfy the client without uppseting themselves and affecting the selling goals we set as a company. In addition they will benefit from an express course on stress management that i'm willing to punch in at the end of the meeting. The session will be held on Tuesday the 25th of Novembre after the lunch break around 2 PM. Furthermore, I need to book the main conference room and provide a projector, A4 papers and sticky notes with different colors. looking forward for that datesincerely may wazzan

Dear Mr Possible spelling mistake found.JohnJonHONHonJSONJ hon
Jhon
 I'm writing you this letter in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about the presentation I am intending to present in our up coming training as per our latest discussion. For that reason I chose a topic that in my opinion is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 one, specifically
 in these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
Did you mean "economic" (=connected with economy)?economic
economical
 crisis we are facing. This is why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 chose to talk about * communication and selling This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and managing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 among the stafReplace by the typographical symbol.f×.f·.
f*.
 Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 it's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to discuss such topic it's rather
 crucial to do it. Seeing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 times we are facing and all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 our staff are being put
 to, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them are not being able to communicate right to the costumers or between each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "other"?other
others
 which is causing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 complaints that we didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to face This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. That being said
 teaching them the right techniques of communication would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them The verb 'of' is used with an infinitive: "to know" or "know".to knowknow
knowing
 how to satisfy the client without Possible spelling mistake found.upsetting
uppseting
 themselves and affecting the selling goals we set as a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In The comma is probably missing here: "addition, they".addition, they
addition they
 will benefit from an express course on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 management that Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 willing to punch in at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the meeting. The session will be held
 on Tuesday the 25th of Possible spelling mistake found.November
Novembre
 after the lunch break around 2 PM. Furthermore
, I need to book the main conference room and provide a projector, A4 papers and sticky notes with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 colors. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLooking
looking
 forward for that Possible spelling mistake found.date sincerely
datesincerely
 may Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphwazzan.wazzan!wazzan?wazzan:wazzan,wazzan;
wazzan