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You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it B3EV

Dear all my friends, I hope you all health are radiant and good spirits of life and also achieving our task. I am heartily thankful for those who attended my memorable moments with me. I am writing a letter to remind you all that we had celebrated our beautiful day. In the past year, I arranged a son's birthday party in my hometown because my parents want to party at our native place so relatives are attending the birthday party. I invited all of you but I can't think of you all coming to my native place because my native place is far away from our working place. On that day, suddenly I saw all of you. I was surprised and couldn't express my words to you and your gift gave my son's he is extremely happy instead of all gifts because my son is a car lover like me. Everyday I remember all of you when Everyday he is playing with the car. That's the best gift for my son. In this year, we can't meet everybody there-upon covid pandemic. We all have been working from home. I hope we will start together in our office soon. Your friend Hemang patel

Dear all my friends,

I hope you all health are radiant and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 spirits of life and also
 achieving our task. I am heartily
 thankful for those who attended my memorable moments with me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing a letter to remind you all that we had celebrated our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 day.

In the past year, I arranged a son's birthday party in my hometown This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my parents want to party at our native You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 relatives are attending the birthday party. I invited all of you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of you all coming to my native You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my native You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 is far away from our working You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. On that day, suddenly
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 all of you. I was surprised
 and couldn't express my words to you and your gift gave my son's he is extremely
 happy instead
 of all gifts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my son is a car lover like me. 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean "every day, I"?Every day, I
Everyday I
 remember all of you when Everyday he is playing with the car. That's the best gift for my son. In this year, we can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 everybody there-upon Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid
 pandemic. We all have been working from home. I hope we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 together in our office This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Your friend

Possible spelling mistake found.Hem ang
Hemang
Possible spelling mistake found.PatelpanelpastelPatepatepates
patel