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You are applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university Write a letter to inquire about the course.IN your letter: *explain which course you are interested in *tell what you know about the university *explain why should receive the scholarship

You are applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university Write a letter to inquire about the course. IN your letter: *explain which course you are interested in *tell what you know about the university *explain why should receive the scholarship erjG
I am writing this letter to inquire about new courses which is added to the university. I also want information about how to get scholarship for perticular program. I am interested in the chemistry subject organic compound program. Let me explain in more detail about university. I came to know about this university of Cambridge from news paper. There were details about the new courses which provide scholarship, to those who pass the entrance test of university. There are numerous information related to various chemistry sub-topics programs such as the Inorganic, the Physical, the Bio-chemistry and so on. I would like to enroll for upcoming year scholarship program. I belongs to middle class family so, to get scholarship is the main purpose to cut down on fees. Then only i can apply in a foreign university. Furthermore, on the basis of scholarship, the university helps to get part time job for students under different scholarship program. Thus, I am interested to get scholarship. I will wait for your reply. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Amita Dholakia.
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scholarship
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I
am interested
in the chemistry subject organic compound program.

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Let
me
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explain
in more detail about
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university
. I came to know about this
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university of Cambridge
from
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news paper
. There were
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details
about the new courses which provide
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scholarship
, to those who pass the entrance
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test
of
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university
. There are numerous information related to various chemistry sub-topics
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programs
such as the Inorganic, the Physical, the Bio-chemistry and
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on.

I would like to enroll for upcoming year
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scholarship
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program
. I
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get
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scholarship
is the main purpose to
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cut
down on fees. Then
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university
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Furthermore
, on the basis of
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university
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helps
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part time
job for students under
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scholarship
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Thus
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scholarship.

I will wait for your reply.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter You are applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university Write a letter to inquire about the course. IN your letter: *explain which course you are interested in *tell what you know about the university *explain why should receive the scholarship

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7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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