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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card ddME
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my student identification card. I would like to get it replaced, and I will explain myself in this letter. I think i have left the card in the at the West City Hall room number 10081. on January 26, 2021. I had the Economics 105 final exam on that day, and the professor has requested us to bring the student identification card to the exam, so they can verify us. I had another final exam right after the econmocis 105, so I had to finish the exam in a rush. Thus, I have forgot to bring the card along with me. The lost of the student identification card has restricted me to access to gym, library, and student residence. Besides, I also had to bring my passport to final exams as to identiy myself. I would like to request to get the card replaced. It would be much appreciated if it can be done as soon as possible. Please contact me if you need more inforation, and also kindly advise the approximate fee. Thank you in advance for your assistance. Yours faithfully, Annabel
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my
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student
identification
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card
. I would like to
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get
it replaced, and I will
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explain
myself in this letter.

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i
have
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left
the
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card
in the at the West City Hall room number 10081.
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on
January 26, 2021. I had the Economics 105 final exam on that day, and the professor has requested us to bring the
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student
identification
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card
to the exam,
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so
they can verify us. I had another final exam right after the
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econmocis
105,
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so
I had to finish the exam in a rush.
Thus
, I have
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forgot
to bring the
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card
along with me.

The lost of the
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student
identification
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card
has restricted me to access to gym, library, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
residence.
Besides
, I
also
had to bring my passport to final exams as to
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identiy
myself.

I would like to request to
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get
the
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card
replaced. It would be much appreciated if it can
be done
as
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soon
as possible.
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Please
contact me if you need more
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inforation
, and
also
kindly advise the approximate fee.

Thank you in advance for your assistance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Annabel
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IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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