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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take Aqj3
Dear Mrs. Gupta First of all, I would like to apologize for the trouble you faced because of the noise that happened last night in my house. I will definitely take care of it in the coming days and will not give you another chance for any complaint. Actually, yesterday night, I arranged a birthday party for my daughter and invited her college friends also who were meeting with each other after a long span of time. She was very happy as it was a surprise for her. she was dancing along with her friends to loud music which we could not stop for the sake of making her day special. Again I am really sorry but I want to compensate a Rs 5000 cheque for the disturbance which you experienced because of me. I will appreciate if you accept my apologies along with the enclosed cheque. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks, Yours Sincerely, Arfa Naz
Dear Mrs. Gupta

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I would like to apologize for the trouble you faced
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the noise that happened last night in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I will definitely take care of it in the coming days and will not give you another chance for any complaint.

Actually,
This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "last night" is used.
yesterday night
, I arranged a birthday party for my daughter and invited her college friends
also
who were meeting with each other after a long span of time. She was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
happy as it was a surprise for her.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
she
was dancing along with her friends to loud music which we could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
for the sake of making her day special.

Again I am
really
sorry
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I want to compensate a Rs 5000
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
for the disturbance which you experienced
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of me. I will appreciate if you accept my apologies along with the enclosed
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks,

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Arfa
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Naz

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise, apologise, describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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