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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. M5MQ
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to obtain some information about the Environmental awareness seminar happening next month in Australia. I am interested in attending this seminar as the research work for my PhD course is based on this particular topic. This would assist me in planning my trip accordingly. Let me explain in detail what all information i am looking for. I know that the Seminar will be conducted next month but I am not sure of the exact dates and duration of the program. Moreover, not much information has been provided about the program on the internet so some details on the programs which are going to be conducted would be great. Coming to accommodation and the overall cost, on the website there was a one-liner mentioned about accommodation. Since it would be my first visit to the country, searching for accommodation and managing the cost of the program would be a challenge for me. Would you kindly provide me detailed information on all the mentioned areas? Using this valuable information I could plan my trip and finances in a better way. Thank you for your consideration. Your's faithfully, Pratik
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to obtain
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some
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information
about the Environmental awareness seminar happening
next
month in Australia.

I
am interested
in attending this seminar as the research work for my PhD course
is based
on this particular topic. This would assist me in planning my trip

accordingly
.

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Let
me
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explain
in detail what all
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information
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am looking for. I know that the Seminar will
be conducted
next
month
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but
I am not sure of the exact dates and duration of the
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program
.
Moreover
, not much
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information
has
been provided
about the
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program
on the internet
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so
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some
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details
on the
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programs
which are going to
be conducted
would be great. Coming to accommodation and the
overall
cost, on the website there was a one-liner
Did you mean simply "mentioned accommodation"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mentioned about accommodation
. Since it would be my
first
visit to the country, searching for accommodation and managing the cost of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
program
would be a challenge for me.

Would you kindly provide me detailed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on all the mentioned areas? Using this valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
I could plan my trip and finances in a better way.

Thank you for your consideration.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your's
faithfully
,

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Pratik
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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8 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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