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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. bq2X
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about improper system of garbage collection in our area. System is resulting in lots of inconvenience for us and other locals of the Ellendale Avenue area. Firstly, the major flaw of the rubbish collection system is that garbage trucks are not scheduled on regular basis in our area. Moreover, personnel working for collecting garbage are not doing their job effectively. For example, they are not emptying the garbage bins completely and as a result, the remains are producing foul smell after staying in the bins over the long time. Secondly, since the irregular visits of the garbage trucks, bins are getting full before the next scheduled run and we are lacking space to dispose garbage. On top of that, neighbours are constantly complaining about disgusting smell that comes out of the bins. I would suggest that please promptly consult with the supervisor who is allocated to take care of garbage in our area so mentioned problems can be taken care of as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hear from you soon, and requesting that this matter should be paid immidiate attention. Yours faithfully, Viraj Gohil
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about improper system of garbage collection in our area. System is resulting in lots of inconvenience for us and other locals of the
Ellendale
Avenue area.

Firstly
, the major flaw of the rubbish collection system is that garbage trucks are not scheduled on regular basis in our area.
Moreover
, personnel working for collecting garbage are not doing their job
effectively
.
For example
, they are not emptying the garbage bins completely and
as a result
, the remains are producing foul smell after staying in the bins over the long time.

Secondly
, since the irregular visits of the garbage trucks, bins are getting full
before
the
next
scheduled
run and
we are lacking space to dispose garbage.
On top of that
,
neighbours
are
constantly
complaining about disgusting smell that
comes
out of the bins.

I would suggest that
please
promptly
consult with the supervisor who
is allocated
to take care of garbage in our area
so
mentioned problems can
be taken
care of as
soon
as possible.

I am looking forward
to hear
from you
soon
, and requesting that this matter should
be paid
immidiate
attention.

Yours
faithfully
,

Viraj
Gohil
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IELTS letter Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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