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Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take B3Lw
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not continue the course that I am taking on your class due to my hectic schedule. I just want you to know that I have a full time job in the morning as a fast food servant and most of the time when the restaurant is full of customer I cannot leave easily as a result it affects my schedule going to your class. I know that your class is very important for my course but I have no choice but to cancel the course since I did not follow and catch up all the lesson in time due to my absence. I would to take this opportunity to ask you if I can take the course again next semester. I believed that this will be the best time for me since my contract will be end by next month. I am looking forward to hear you soon regarding this matter. Yours sincerely, Noemi Canonce
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not continue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that I am taking on your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
due to my hectic schedule. I
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just
want you to know that I have a full
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time
job in the morning as a
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fast
food servant and most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
when the restaurant is full of customer I cannot
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leave
easily
as a result
it affects my schedule going to your
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class
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know that your
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class
is
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very
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important
for my
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course
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but
I have no choice
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but
to cancel the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
since I did not follow and catch up all the lesson in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
due to my absence.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would to take this opportunity to ask you if I can take the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
again
next
semester.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
believed that this will be the best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for me since my contract will be
Consider using a past participle here: "ended".
end
by
next
month.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
you
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soon
regarding this matter.

Yours
sincerely
,

Noemi
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Canonce

IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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