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Dear Sir/Madam, First, I am very sorry to disturp you, The reasons for the loud voices and disturbence, There are ongoing work in my apartment as you might know there are pipes that are fractured, These cracks might cause a very harmful effects on the buliding, secondly, I am very sorry let me expalin, The problem will last for almost ten days, This is very serious problem that should be handled carefully, in the previous days we have manged to stop the leaking, The leakage have caused severe and intence cracks on the walls, A problem like this might have extremely awful experience god forbid the buliding might lean to the right side, the action we have taken so far is suitable to the problem and god willing it will lead to a great result after all, I will also ask the plumbers to fix any problems that you might have with your kitchens, Looking to hearing from you soon, Best wishs, Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir/Madam, First, I am very sorry to disturp you, The reasons for the loud voices and disturbence, There are ongoing work in my apartment as you might know there are pipes that are fractured, These cracks might cause a very harmful effects on the buliding, secondly, I am very sorry let me expalin, The problem will last for almost ten days, This is very serious problem that should be handled carefully, in the previous days we have manged to stop the leaking, The leakage have caused severe and intence cracks on the walls, A problem like this might have extremely awful experience god forbid the buliding might lean to the right side, the action we have taken so far is suitable to the problem and god willing it will lead to a great result after all, I will also ask the plumbers to fix any problems that you might have with your kitchens, Looking to hearing from you soon, Best wishs, Yours faithfully, AqgX
Dear Sir/Madam, First, I am very sorry to disturp you, The reasons for the loud voices and disturbence, There are ongoing work in my apartment as you might know there are pipes that are fractured, These cracks might cause a very harmful effects on the buliding, secondly, I am very sorry let me expalin, The problem will last for almost ten days, This is very serious problem that should be handled carefully, in the previous days we have manged to stop the leaking, The leakage have caused severe and intence cracks on the walls, A problem like this might have extremely awful experience god forbid the buliding might lean to the right side, the action we have taken so far is suitable to the problem and god willing it will lead to a great result after all, I will also ask the plumbers to fix any problems that you might have with your kitchens, Looking to hearing from you soon, Best wishs, Yours faithfully,
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IELTS letter Dear Sir/Madam, First, I am very sorry to disturp you, The reasons for the loud voices and disturbence, There are ongoing work in my apartment as you might know there are pipes that are fractured, These cracks might cause a very harmful effects on the buliding, secondly, I am very sorry let me expalin, The problem will last for almost ten days, This is very serious problem that should be handled carefully, in the previous days we have manged to stop the leaking, The leakage have caused severe and intence cracks on the walls, A problem like this might have extremely awful experience god forbid the buliding might lean to the right side, the action we have taken so far is suitable to the problem and god willing it will lead to a great result after all, I will also ask the plumbers to fix any problems that you might have with your kitchens, Looking to hearing from you soon, Best wishs, Yours faithfully,

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