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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer NeW0

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter with regard to a room sharing with another student, there are many problems. Allow me to explain what happened. For the past two weeks, I have been studying in my sharing room because I have many assignments to submit to the faculty. I usually sleep early and wake up early to finish my work but my roommate is the opposite, he wakes up too late on the day and stays all the night playing games and listening to loud music so I could not sleep at all for the last couple of weeks. Additionally, I am not comfortable with the room sharing because it does not have an air condition, it is too hot. I was wondering if you could help me to find a single room with air conditions until this semester end. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience Yours faithfully, Mohammed Chyad

Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter with regard to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 sharing with another student, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 what happened.

For the past two weeks, I have been studying in my sharing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 assignments to submit to the faculty.

I usually
 sleep early and wake up early to finish my work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my roommate is the opposite, he wakes up too late on the day and stays all the night playing games and listening to loud music This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I could not sleep at all for the last couple of weeks. Additionally
, I am not comfortable with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 sharing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it does not have an air condition, it is too hot.

I was wondering if you could In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?help me find
help me to find
 a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with air conditions until this semester This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience

Yours faithfully
,

Mohammed Possible spelling mistake found.Chad
Chyad