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write a letter to boss for 2 weeks holidays after 4 years . why you want holidays.

write a letter to boss for 2 weeks holidays after 4 years. why you want holidays. ymRg
Hi John, I would like to apply my holidays for the next 2 weeks. As you know, I am working here since 2019. I never had any leaves of ongoing work, because I always thought my work is my first priority. Therefore, I gave my best as I can. In addition, I saw my payslips, there are a lot of annual leaves, which I have not used yet. My main reason is that my mother is in India. she is doing everything by herself. Her one eye is not ok. I thought she is operating her eye soon. She needs me in this difficult situation. I know everything about medicines because I had completed my study in the medical field. She can take advantage of it if I will be there. I am looking forward to back hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Manjit kaur
Hi John, I would like to apply my holidays for the
next
2 weeks. As you know, I am working here since 2019. I never had any
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of ongoing work,
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because
I always
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my work is my
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priority.
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, I
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my payslips, there are
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a lot of
annual
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, which I have not
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My main reason is that my mother is in India.
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she
is doing everything by herself. Her one eye is not ok. I
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thought
she is operating her eye
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soon
. She needs me in this difficult situation. I know everything about medicines
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because
I had completed my study in the medical field. She can take advantage of it if I will be there. I am looking forward to back hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
,
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Manjit
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kaur

IELTS letter write a letter to boss for 2 weeks holidays after 4 years. why you want holidays.

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2 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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