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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take Ad03
Dear Neighbours, I have received a letter from the Society head Mr. Smith, complaining about the noise from my house. I apaologiese for the trouble you all faced. I organised a party at my place for welcoming one of my friend coming back from Canada after 5 long years. And we were so overwhelmed that we started dancing on the loud music and completely forgot that people around us must be sleeping and will be disturbed. In celebration, we didnt look at the time, it was 2 am. I sincerely apologise for the disturbance caused and will make sure, next time when we organise a house party, sound will be not so loud. I will strictly inform all my friends about the disturbance caused to the neighbours because of our party and instruct them not to increase the volume beyond a certain limit. Also, i will keep a watch on time and will try to wind up everything by 12 am maximum but in case, if it exceeds the said time, music will not be loud, i can assure this to you. Best Regards Ankita Parekh
Dear
Neighbours
,

I have received a letter from the Society head Mr. Smith, complaining about the noise from my
house
. I
apaologiese
for the trouble you all faced.
I
organised
a party at my place for welcoming one of my friend coming back from Canada after 5 long years. And we were
so
overwhelmed that we
started
dancing on the loud music and completely forgot that
people
around us
must
be sleeping and will
be disturbed
. In celebration, we
didnt
look at the
time
, it was 2 am.

I
sincerely
apologise
for the disturbance caused and will
make
sure,
next
time
when we
organise
a
house
party, sound will be not
so
loud. I will
strictly
inform all my friends about the disturbance caused to the
neighbours
because
of our party and instruct them not to increase the volume beyond a certain limit.
Also
,
i
will
keep
a
watch
on
time
and will try to wind up everything by 12 am maximum
but
in case, if it exceeds the said
time
, music will not be loud,
i
can assure this to you.

Best Regards

Ankita
Parekh
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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