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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He or she had asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He or she had asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer oXPD
Dear Samer, I hope that you are fine. I am writing this letter in reference to your interest to get my device for camping holiday in the summer season. Two years before in the month of August, I went for one of medical camping to Northern area. Besides, provide the basic medical awareness, me and my team enjoyed lot. If you are going to mountain very so you will love the greeneries, beautiful sun rises, and their delectable foods. As you told me that you are going to do in October so it will be very cold there. I will advise to take some warm clothes, some packet of coffee and soups which can keep you warm. One more thing some medicines such as panadol, cough syrup, vicks balm, and some anti-allergic drugs there is a chance that you may need. As I told you that I went to camping 2 years before so I would like to join with you. You can ask from your organizer and let me know about the charges. For the meantime, I will discuss with my mum to take permission. I am anxiously waiting for your positive response. Your Riffat
Dear
Samer
,

I hope that you are fine. I am writing this letter in reference to your interest to
get
my device for camping holiday in
the summer season
.

Two years
before
in the month of August, I went for one of medical camping to Northern area.
Besides
, provide the basic medical awareness, me and my team enjoyed lot. If you are going to mountain
very
so
you will
love
the
greeneries
,
beautiful
sun rises, and their delectable foods.

As you
told
me that you are going to do in October
so
it will be
very
cold
there. I will advise to take
some
warm clothes,
some
packet of coffee and soups which can
keep
you warm. One more thing
some
medicines such as
panadol
, cough syrup,
vicks
balm, and
some
anti-allergic drugs there is a chance that you may need.

As I
told
you that I went to camping 2 years
before
so
I would like to
join
with you. You can ask from your organizer and
let
me know about the charges. For the meantime, I will discuss with my mum to take permission.

I am
anxiously
waiting for your
positive
response.

Your
Riffat
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He or she had asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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