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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 9LrEr
Dear Sally, I am your neighbour Gunjan. I am extremely sorry for the disturbance caused by my niece. These days she is a little cranky and started crying whenever she feels like it. The reason for this annoying behaviour is that she lost her doll two days back. Moreover, this doll was her favourite one which she lost while on the school picnic. I really apologise for the inconvenience caused to you and your family last day and today. I tried to calm her down by visiting her maternal uncle's home and his favourite play area in the mall but all go in vain as she was not happy there as well. We have ordered a similar doll for her which will be delivered by tomorrow afternoon. And I really hope that after seeing her new doll she will be happy and will make less noise. Hope you will understand the same. If you want to talk, you can knock on my door and I will be happy to meet you and apologise to you as well. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours truly, Gunjan
Dear Sally,

I am your
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neighbour
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Gunjan
. I am
extremely
sorry for the disturbance caused by my niece. These days she is a
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little
cranky and
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started
crying whenever she feels like it. The reason for this annoying
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behaviour
is that she lost her
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doll
two days back.
Moreover
, this
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doll
was her
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favourite
one which she lost while on the school picnic.

I
really
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apologise
for the inconvenience caused to you and your family last day and
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today
. I tried to calm her down by visiting her maternal uncle's home and his
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favourite
play area in the mall
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but
all go in vain as she was not happy there
as well
.

We have ordered a similar
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doll
for her which will
be delivered
by tomorrow afternoon. And I
really
hope that after seeing her new
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doll
she will be happy and will
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make
less noise. Hope you will understand the same. If you want to talk, you can knock on my door and I will be happy to
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meet
you and
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apologise
to you
as well
.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Yours
truly
,

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Gunjan

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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