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You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house • say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend • suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house • say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend • suggest when and where you could meet your friend next Jo0A6
Dear VinoHope you and your family are doing well. I reached my place safely. I am writing this to thank for inviting me to visit your new pretty house. It’s been an incredible moment and we met after half decade. Your family members were recognized me and the way they treated me during my visit was really appreciable. Well, house is constructed in traditional way. Even though it’s build in our culture, wood works mesmerizing. Since our college days, you have a great inclination towards home interior. One thing I want you to let know that your garden is organized in well manner. We had a goodtime with all of our school mates. I wish to make it at least once in the year. I would like you to invite my daughter’s birthday party which is on April 11th which is friday. That would be great if you come along with your family members as well. The event is going to be held on The Holiday in. Also received children theme area. Please hurry up bit in planning, whereas I can reserve the room for 3 days and enjoy the event together. Looking for your reply. Yours lovingly, Aarthi J
Dear
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VinoHope
you and your family are doing well. I reached my place
safely
. I am writing this to thank for inviting me to visit your new pretty
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. It’s been an incredible
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
moment and
we met after half decade. Your family members
were recognized
me and the way they treated me during my visit was
really
appreciable.

Well,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is constructed
in traditional way.
Even though
it’s build in our culture, wood works mesmerizing. Since our college days, you have a great inclination towards home interior. One thing I want you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
know that your garden
is organized
in well manner. We had a
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goodtime
with all of our school mates. I wish to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it at least once in the year.

I would like you to invite my daughter’s birthday party which is on April 11th which is
Possible spelling mistake found.
friday
. That would be great if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
along with your family members
as well
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
is going to
be held
on The Holiday in.
Also
received children theme area.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
hurry up bit in planning, whereas I can reserve the room for 3 days and enjoy the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
together.

Looking for your reply.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Aarthi
J
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IELTS letter You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house • say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend • suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

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199 words
6.0
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