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You are planning a vacation and you need someone to look after your cat while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are going away for a week describe the cat ask the neighbour if they can perform specific duties to care for the cat

You are planning a vacation and you need someone to look after your cat while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are going away for a week describe the cat ask the neighbour if they can perform specific duties to care for the cat GMlkw
Dear Sonal, I am writing this letter to find out, if you can look after my cat 'Milly' for a week's time in my absence, because of my sudden travel plans to Mumbai for a business conference. My boss is unwell and cannot travel hence, he asked me to attend, and represent our company in the conference. The event is taking place in the Taj Hotel, for a duration of one week, starting on 18th April 2021. Being neighbours for 2 years, you are already familiar with Milly, and she is comfortable with you too. As you know, she is a friendly cat, and won't trouble you at all as long you feed her on time. She loves to play with balls and her toy bunny. Her favourite food is milk, and she spends most of her time in her cozy basket. Request you to confirm if you can take care of her for a week. I will give you a written time-table with all her daily activities. I will leave her basket, cat food and toys with you. You just have to make sure, you feed her as per the timings and ensure her water bowl is full, as she gets very thirty during summers. Looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours faithfully, Meera
Dear
Sonal
,

I am writing this letter to find out, if you can look after my cat '
Milly
' for a week's time in my absence,
because
of my sudden travel plans to Mumbai for a business conference. My boss is unwell and cannot travel
hence
, he asked me to attend, and represent our
company
in the conference. The
event
is taking place in the
Taj
Hotel, for a duration of one week, starting on 18th April 2021.

Being
neighbours
for 2 years, you are already familiar with
Milly
, and she is comfortable with you too. As you know, she is a friendly cat, and won't trouble you at all as long you feed her on time. She
loves
to play with balls and her toy bunny. Her
favourite
food is milk, and she spends most of her time in her cozy basket.

Request you to confirm if you can take care of her for a week. I will give you a written time-table with all her daily activities. I will
leave
her basket, cat food and toys with you. You
just
have to
make
sure, you feed her as per the timings and ensure her water bowl is full, as she
gets
very
thirty during summers.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
!

Yours
faithfully
,
Meera
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IELTS letter You are planning a vacation and you need someone to look after your cat while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are going away for a week describe the cat ask the neighbour if they can perform specific duties to care for the cat

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  American English
6 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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