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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant 7a5bY
Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing this letter to inform you about the dissatisfactory experience I had in your hotel on my last visit. I have been a regular customer to your restaurant for the past 2 years. But recently, I noticed that the quality of food has been declining. I am disappointed and upset about this development. It pains me to see that such a hard-working and reputed setting is losing its name. I am member of local tennis club which holds their annual celebration at your hotel. The service provided by your team was top-notch and customer friendly. The problem began after the arrival of the new dishes (starters and soups), they were over-cooked or salty. By the time, we reached the main course we had already lost our appetite. I would like to make some recommendations to you. Firstly, re-check the food items that you are purchasing as the food that was prepared was not fresh. Secondly, experiment with the variety of dishes but restraint from adding them to menu until fully confident. Lastly, try to reduce the preparation time of the food. Awaiting your prompt response. Yours faithfully, H. F
Dear Sir or Madam.

I am writing this letter to inform you about the
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dissatisfactory
experience I had in your hotel on my last visit.

I have been a regular customer to your restaurant for the past 2 years.
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But
recently, I noticed that the quality of food has been declining. I
am disappointed
and upset about this development. It pains me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that such a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
-working and reputed setting is losing its name.

I am member of local tennis club which holds their annual celebration at your hotel. The service provided by your team was top-notch and customer friendly. The problem began after the arrival of the new dishes (starters and soups), they were over-cooked or salty. By the time, we reached the main course we had already lost our appetite.

I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
recommendations to you.
Firstly
, re-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the food items that you are purchasing as the food that
was prepared
was not fresh.
Secondly
, experiment with the variety of dishes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
restraint from adding them to menu until
fully
confident.
Lastly
, try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the preparation time of the food.

Awaiting your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

H. F
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IELTS letter You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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194 words
6.5
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