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The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. Write a letter to Introduce your self Explain the condition of the road And suggest what they should do

The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. Write a letter to Introduce your self Explain the condition of the road And suggest what they should do e5KoB
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you this letter to express my disappointment on the road condition on front of my house. My name is Vitor Trump and live at house no 39, ring street. As a professional I am a doctor and I need to get into any emergency case at any time. The road in front of my house has number of pot holes from long time, which is causing me trouble while driving or parking my vehicle. Recently, It has also been observed various accident due to bad road condition. Also, In the month of monsoon, water gets loaded with pot holes which can are increasing insect like mosquitoes, which are harm to health. Please can the work be done to fix as earlier as possible. If new road construction is going to take time, please can the holes be filled with mud and sand to fix it quickly. Hope you understood my problem and will take immediate action on it. Yours faithfully, Victor Trump
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you this letter to express my disappointment on the
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road
condition on front of my
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house
. My name is
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Vitor
Trump and
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live
at
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house
no 39, ring street.

As a professional I am a doctor and I need to
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get
into any emergency case at any time. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
in front of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
has number of pot holes from long time, which is causing me trouble while driving or parking my vehicle. Recently, It has
also
been observed
various accident due to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
condition.

Also
, In the month of monsoon, water
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gets
loaded with pot holes which can are increasing insect like mosquitoes, which are harm to health.
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Please
can the work
be done
to
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fix
as
Did you mean "early"?
earlier
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
possible.

If new
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road
construction is going to take time,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
can the holes
be filled
with mud and sand to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it
quickly
.

Hope you understood my problem and will take immediate action on it.

Yours
faithfully
,

Victor Trump

IELTS letter The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. Write a letter to Introduce your self Explain the condition of the road And suggest what they should do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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