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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 7aAPk
Dear All, I have recently received a formal complaint regarding the noise from my flat which has indeed been a cause for some distress to you all. I would like to take this opportunity and explain the reason for the noise, recently because of the sudden clogging of the drainage pipes there has been a problem with the water drainage and it called for immediate repairs so it has to be attended on urgent basis because for which there was work done during the day and the night as all the old drainage pipes had to be replaced to fix the problem because of which there was noise that might have put you all in destress. I would like to apologise for the distress caused because of the noise. I will make sure that that such type of incidents are taken care during day keeping the noise in control. Regards
Dear All,

I have recently received a formal complaint regarding the
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noise
from my flat which has
indeed
been a cause for
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some
distress to you all. I would like to take this opportunity and
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explain
the reason for the
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noise
, recently
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because
of the sudden clogging of the drainage pipes there has been a problem with the water drainage and it called for immediate repairs
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so
it
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has to
be attended
on urgent basis
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because
for which there was work done during the day and the night as all the
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old
drainage pipes had to
be replaced
to
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fix
the problem
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because
of which there was
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noise
that might have put you all in
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destress
.

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I
would like to
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apologise
for the distress caused
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because
of the noise.

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I
will
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make
sure
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that that
such type of incidents
are taken
care during day keeping the
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noise
in control.

Regards

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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  American English
5 paragraphs
149 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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