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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 7aA0k
DEAR MR SMITH I HAVE GOT INVITATION TO ATTEND FINANCIAL ACCOUNTING STANDARD SETTING SEMINAR ON SUNDAY. SINCE I HAVE BEEN WORKING FOR CENTRAL BANK OF BANGLADESH, THE AFOREMENTIONED TOPIC IS VERY MUCH IMPORTANT FOR MY PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT. TO ATTEND SUCH PROGRAM I NEED TO TAKE PREPARATION. FOR THAT I NEED SOME INFORMATION REGARDING THE PROGRAM, SUCH AS STARTING DATE OF THE PROGRAM, DETAILED PROGRAM CONTENT, ACCOMMODATION ARRANGEMENT AND LASTLY, COST ASSOCIATED WITH THE SEMINAR. I WILL BE LOOKING FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU SOON. THANK YOU. SINCERELY YOURS
DEAR MR SMITH

I HAVE
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INVITATION TO ATTEND FINANCIAL ACCOUNTING STANDARD SETTING SEMINAR ON SUNDAY. SINCE I HAVE BEEN WORKING FOR CENTRAL BANK OF BANGLADESH, THE AFOREMENTIONED TOPIC IS
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VERY
MUCH
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IMPORTANT
FOR MY PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT.

TO ATTEND SUCH
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PROGRAM
I NEED TO TAKE PREPARATION. FOR THAT I NEED
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SOME
INFORMATION REGARDING THE
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PROGRAM
, SUCH AS STARTING DATE OF THE
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PROGRAM
, DETAILED
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PROGRAM
CONTENT, ACCOMMODATION ARRANGEMENT AND
LASTLY
, COST ASSOCIATED WITH THE SEMINAR.

I WILL BE LOOKING FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU
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SOON
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THANK YOU.

SINCERELY
YOURS

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
87 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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