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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. g5yWL
Dear Ray, My name is Sushant working as a senior editor with the daily newparer. I will like you to formally accept my request to participate in work related seminar scheduled to happen in Brazil in June. I am very optimistic that this platform will help in increasing work efficency and resolving issues that are at the workplace. I will also like to enquire about the confirmed dates and the datailed imformatin ablout the programs. Also i would appriciate if you can also give the information regarding the total cost and the accomodation status so that i can plan it in advance. Regards,
Dear Ray,

My name is
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Sushant
working as a senior editor with the daily
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newparer
. I will like you to
formally
accept my request to participate in work related seminar scheduled to happen in Brazil in June. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
optimistic that this platform will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in increasing work
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efficency
and resolving issues that are at the workplace.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
also
like to
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enquire
about the confirmed dates and the
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datailed
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imformatin
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ablout
the programs.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
Did you mean "I"?
i
would
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appriciate
if you can
also
give the information regarding the total cost and the
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accomodation
status
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so
that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can plan it in advance.

Regards,
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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