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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. g5yWL

Dear Ray, My name is Sushant working as a senior editor with the daily newparer. I will like you to formally accept my request to participate in work related seminar scheduled to happen in Brazil in June. I am very optimistic that this platform will help in increasing work efficency and resolving issues that are at the workplace. I will also like to enquire about the confirmed dates and the datailed imformatin ablout the programs. Also i would appriciate if you can also give the information regarding the total cost and the accomodation status so that i can plan it in advance. Regards,

Dear Ray,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.SusanSusanaSunhatNishant
Sushant
 working as a senior editor with the daily Possible spelling mistake found.new parer
newparer
. I will like you to formally
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very
 optimistic that this platform will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in increasing work Possible spelling mistake found.efficiency
efficency
 and resolving issues that are at the workplace.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will also
 like to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about the confirmed dates and the Possible spelling mistake found.detailed
datailed
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imformatin
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ablout
 the programs. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would Possible spelling mistake found.appreciate
appriciate
 if you can also
 give the information regarding the total cost and the Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
 status This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can plan it in advance.

Regards, 

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

103 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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