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You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Tell your friend what your like about his new place. Say what you enjoyed most about your stay with him. Suggest when and where you could meet .

You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Tell your friend what your like about his new place. Say what you enjoyed most about your stay with him. Suggest when and where you could meet. XGPqE
Dear John, Hope you and your family doing well! I am writing it to express an incredible experience at your newly build home. It was pleasure to spent a quality time with your parents and enjoy the spectacular hospitality. The way you treated me during my visit was really appreciate, I can never be a host like you. Furthermore, your home has outstanding interior, specially, I loved the design of PVC sheets in your room. This place has adequate ventilation at every corner that helps to keep a cool inside. The kitchen of your home is spacious and structure with pleasant paints on the walls. Moreover, the terrace has enormous space to walk and the garden at front near the entrance embrace a glamorous in it. Actually, I have a plethora of compliments for your place that can be elaborate in brief at our meeting. Therefore, I am curious that you should come to my place at my birthday next Sunday. I will expect you to be with me at that time. Please try to make it. Best wishes,
Dear John,

Hope you and your family doing well!

I am writing it to express an incredible experience at your
newly
build home. It was pleasure
to spent
a quality time with your parents and enjoy the spectacular hospitality.

The way you treated me during my visit was
really
appreciate
, I can never be a host like you.
Furthermore
, your home has outstanding interior,
specially
, I
loved
the design of PVC sheets in your room. This place has adequate ventilation at every corner that
helps
to
keep
a cool inside. The kitchen of your home is spacious and structure with pleasant paints on the walls.
Moreover
, the terrace has enormous space to walk and the garden at front near the entrance embrace a glamorous in it.

Actually, I have a plethora of compliments for your place that can be elaborate
in brief
at our meeting.
Therefore
, I am curious that you should
come
to my place at my birthday
next
Sunday. I will
expect
you to be with me at that time.
Please
try to
make
it.

Best wishes,
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IELTS letter You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Tell your friend what your like about his new place. Say what you enjoyed most about your stay with him. Suggest when and where you could meet.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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