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You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what you liked about the food or service

You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what you liked about the food or service yXagD
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the provided services by your restaurant. I visited to your restaurant with my four friends to celebrate my 27th birthday party on 14 February. We had already reserved the table one week prior from my birthday due to non-availability of space on valentine's day. The experience of my this birthday's celebration was disappointed this year. On the one hand, we had to wait more than 40 minutes to get our meal. Moreover, the ordered food was not delicious as you advertise on restaurant's website. Additionally, the food served by waiters in a very careless manner. I would like to suggest you that improve the quality of food and try to deliver mouth watering cuisines to your customers within appropriate time limit rather than waiting for long time for it. Besides, try to provide hospitality and communication skills to your employees. I appreciate the atmosphere of your restaurant with some eye catching views at outside. I hope you will not disappoint me on my next visit to your restaurant. Yours faithfully, David Zane
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the provided services by your restaurant.

I visited to your restaurant with my four friends to celebrate my 27th birthday party on 14 February. We had already reserved the table one week prior from my birthday due to non-availability of space on
valentine's day
.

The experience of my this birthday's celebration
was disappointed
this year. On the one hand, we had to wait more than 40 minutes to
get
our meal.
Moreover
, the ordered food was not delicious as you advertise on restaurant's website.
Additionally
, the food served by waiters in a
very
careless manner.

I would like to suggest you that
improve
the quality of food and try to deliver mouth watering cuisines to your customers within appropriate time limit
rather
than waiting for long time for it.
Besides
, try to provide hospitality and communication
skills
to your employees. I appreciate the atmosphere of your restaurant with
some
eye catching
views at outside.

I hope you will not disappoint me on my
next
visit to your restaurant.

Yours
faithfully
, David Zane
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IELTS letter You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what you liked about the food or service

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7 paragraphs
185 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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