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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: • explain why you are writing • express concern about the missing card • ask them what they intend to do

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: • explain why you are writing • express concern about the missing card • ask them what they intend to do 7aA0X
To, The Manager, ABC bank's Head office, Dear Sir, I am Ms. Shah presently residing in Sector 24, New Delhi. I also hold an account with your bank for 20 years now. Recently, I had applied for an additional bank card to enjoy some liberty with my credit card expenses. However, I am writing this letter to you because when I received an envelope yesterday, it did not contain the card in it. Moreover, it had all relevant documents related to activation process and password. Therefore, I am afraid about the possibility for the card to be mishandled by someone from the bank staff or courier agency which delivered it. Consequently, it can be misused to any extent and lead to unforeseen situations. Hence, I would like to block it from your database itself. Fortunately, the papers which are received by me contain the credit card number and expiry date, which would be enough for the deactivation. Along with this letter, I have enclosed my signed consent form which would be required by bank staff for further process. Apart from this, I insist you to investigate this matter and identify the reason behind such a mishap. Sincerely, Ms. Shah.
To,

The Manager,

ABC bank's Head office,

Dear Sir,

I am Ms. Shah
presently
residing in Sector 24, New Delhi. I
also
hold an account with your
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bank
for 20 years
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now
. Recently, I had applied for an additional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bank
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
to enjoy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
liberty with my credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
expenses.
However
, I am writing this letter to you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
when I received an envelope yesterday, it did not contain the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
in it.
Moreover
, it had all relevant documents related to activation process and password.
Therefore
, I am afraid about the possibility for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
to
be mishandled
by someone from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bank
staff or courier agency which delivered it.
Consequently
, it can
be misused
to any extent and lead to unforeseen situations.

Hence
, I would like to block it from your database itself.
Fortunately
, the papers which
are received
by me contain the credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
number and expiry date, which would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
for the deactivation. Along with this letter, I have enclosed my signed consent form which would
be required
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bank
staff for
further
process. Apart from this, I insist you to investigate this matter and identify the reason behind such a mishap.

Sincerely
,

Ms. Shah.
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IELTS letter You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: • explain why you are writing • express concern about the missing card • ask them what they intend to do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
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