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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future kYRWW
Dear Sir or Madam, i am writing this letter in connection with the meeting that was organised in your hotel on 5th march 2021 for the employees of 'Gallagher'. According to the feedback given by the guests they thoughroughly enjoyed the hotel facilities, ambience of the hotel and they also liked the staff's behaviour they were so polite, neat and clean and also gesture of ladies at the reception counter. However, the guests were really unhappy about the food that was served to them. The Indian dish like chicken biryani were stale, salads looks yellowish and Italian food were tasteless. Due to this the guests moods were spoiled and they were sad after eating the food. Almost 90 percent were gone waste and no one half of their plate. Taking into the consideration of the above said, i would suggest you to take care of the kitchen and have an eye in the cooking process. Moreover, i would also suggests you to appoint a food taster who will rectify this errors in the future. Considering your reputation we will not leave any negative feedback officially but we hope in future we will not have to experience this again. Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I looked forward to hear from you very soon. Your's faithfullyWasim Akhtar
Dear Sir or Madam,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am writing this letter in connection with the meeting that was
Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.
organised
in your hotel on 5th
The month "March" needs to be capitalized.
march
2021 for the employees of 'Gallagher'.

According to the feedback
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given
by the guests they
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thoughroughly
enjoyed the hotel facilities, ambience of the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
hotel and
they
also
liked the staff's
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
they were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
polite, neat and clean and
also
gesture of ladies at the reception counter.

However
, the guests were
really
unhappy about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
that
was served
to them. The Indian dish like chicken biryani were stale, salads looks yellowish and Italian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
were tasteless. Due to this the guests moods were
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
spoiled and
they were sad after eating the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. Almost 90 percent
were gone
waste and no one half of their plate.

Taking into the consideration of the above said,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would suggest you to take care of the kitchen and have an eye in the cooking process.
Moreover
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would
also
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "suggest"
suggests
you to appoint a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
taster who will rectify
Did you mean "these"?
this
errors in the future. Considering your reputation we will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
any
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
feedback
officially
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we hope in future we will not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
experience this again.

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I looked forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your's
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faithfullyWasim
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Akhtar

IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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