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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 2L7A

Dear neighbours, I am writing this letter in response to the complaint filed to society regime for creating noisy atmosphere yesterday. At the onset, I would like to introduce the reasons behind yesterday noises. Since it was my birthday, I threw a kitty party to my friends last night. Hence, music and hooting emotions of my friends turned my flat into bustling place. Secondly, I really want to apologise on this act because I disturbed almost whole society for being insincere last night. I am well aware of my mistake and completely ashamed of the atmosphere we created. I am not only accepting you complaint in positive manner but also truly sorry for the noise inconvenience. Lastly, as this comlaint is being perceived as a lesson, I have learnt that I should avoid such unhealthy social manners in the future. I promise not to held anymore parties at my place again. I hope you all will accept my apologies with your sincere blessings. Hope this letter will convince you to take your complaint back. Your sincerely, Jeet Singh

Dear Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
,

I am writing this letter in response to the complaint filed to society regime for creating noisy atmosphere yesterday.

At the onset, I would like to introduce the reasons behind yesterday noises. Since it was my birthday, I threw a kitty party to my friends last night. Hence
, music and hooting emotions of my friends turned my flat into bustling place.

Secondly
, I really
 want to Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 on this act This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I disturbed almost whole society for being insincere last night. I am well aware of my mistake and completely ashamed of the atmosphere we created. I am not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 accepting you The word 'complaint' is a noun. Did you mean the verb "complained"?complained
complaint
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 manner This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
truly
 sorry for the noise inconvenience.

Lastly
, as this Possible spelling mistake found.complaint
comlaint
 is being perceived
 as a lesson, I have Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 that I should avoid such unhealthy social manners in the future. I promise not to held Make sure that 'anymore' is used as an adverb, not as an adjective. Did you mean "any more"?any more
anymore
 parties at my place again. I hope you all will accept my apologies with your sincere blessings.

Hope this letter will convince you to take your complaint back.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

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Jeet
 Singh

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

177 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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