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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 2L7A
Dear neighbours, I am writing this letter in response to the complaint filed to society regime for creating noisy atmosphere yesterday. At the onset, I would like to introduce the reasons behind yesterday noises. Since it was my birthday, I threw a kitty party to my friends last night. Hence, music and hooting emotions of my friends turned my flat into bustling place. Secondly, I really want to apologise on this act because I disturbed almost whole society for being insincere last night. I am well aware of my mistake and completely ashamed of the atmosphere we created. I am not only accepting you complaint in positive manner but also truly sorry for the noise inconvenience. Lastly, as this comlaint is being perceived as a lesson, I have learnt that I should avoid such unhealthy social manners in the future. I promise not to held anymore parties at my place again. I hope you all will accept my apologies with your sincere blessings. Hope this letter will convince you to take your complaint back. Your sincerely, Jeet Singh
Dear
neighbours
,

I am writing this letter in response to the complaint filed to society regime for creating noisy atmosphere yesterday.

At the onset, I would like to introduce the reasons behind yesterday noises. Since it was my birthday, I threw a kitty party to my friends last night.
Hence
, music and hooting emotions of my friends turned my flat into bustling place.

Secondly
, I
really
want to
apologise
on this act
because
I disturbed almost whole society for being insincere last night. I am well aware of my mistake and completely ashamed of the atmosphere we created. I am not
only
accepting you
complaint
in
positive
manner
but
also
truly
sorry for the noise inconvenience.

Lastly
, as this
comlaint
is
being perceived
as a lesson, I have
learnt
that I should avoid such unhealthy social manners in the future. I promise not to held
anymore
parties at my place again. I hope you all will accept my apologies with your sincere blessings.

Hope this letter will convince you to take your complaint back.

Your
sincerely
,

Jeet
Singh
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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