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you have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the city Museum. In your letter Introduce yourself ,explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in this job.

you have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the city Museum. In your letter Introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in this job. OOqy
Dear sir, I am Methew, persuaing masters in Arts and Sculptures. Seeking for internship of 6 months in the museum as it is indispensable in the last semester to complete the degree as per scheduled of the university. So, I had seen a vacancy in the museum in an English local newspaper. Although, I have an experience of 6 months working in a local museum before joining this course yet, I have a keen interest to work in your esteemed organisation to fulfil the requirements of college's last smester. I have a great skills in exploring the pictures view of others painter's paintings in several different ways. I hope you will be glad to know that I am a diploma holder as well as in the last semester of degree. So I request you to give an opportunity to be a part of your staff members. I sure you not to disappoint at any cost. I shall be great thanful to you for this act of kindness. look forward to your reply. Yours Truly, Methew
Dear sir, I am
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Methew
,
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persuaing
masters in Arts and Sculptures. Seeking for internship of 6 months in the museum as it is indispensable in the last semester to complete the degree as per scheduled of the university.
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So
, I had
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seen
a vacancy in the museum in an English local newspaper.

Although, I have an experience of 6 months working in a local museum
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before
joining this course
yet
, I have a keen interest to work in your esteemed
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organisation
to fulfil the requirements of college's last
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smester
. I have a great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in exploring the pictures view of others painter's paintings in several
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
ways. I hope you will be glad to know that I am a diploma holder
as well
as in the last semester of degree.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I request you to give an opportunity to be a part of your staff members. I sure you not to disappoint at any cost.

I shall be great
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thanful
to you for this act of kindness.

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look
forward to your reply. Yours
Truly
,
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Methew
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IELTS letter you have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the city Museum. In your letter Introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in this job.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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